Wednesday, December 10, 2014

Classmate Critique - Written Assignment

Classmate - Andre Rodriguez 

This photo is good because it shows the landscape of Las Vegas, and is more especially cool because it is taken at night and Vegas is only lit up by its own lights. This photo could be better if he focused in more instead of trying to catch a landscape, and if the camera wasn't as shaky it could help reduce the amount of blurriness in this photo.
This photo focuses on the band director conducting a song. It shows three band students following along to the director's beat. This picture is good as it focuses on the surroundings of the director, but the director himself is blurry. This could be better if we took the time to focus and make sure all subjects in the photos came out clear.
This picture is very good seeing how it was taken in mid air, and captures the details of the subject and its surroundings clearly. This picture, however, can also be improved. The two men on the bottom could've been easily avoided from being in the picture, or cropped out later. Overall, however, this is a very good picture.


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